[WorkInProgress]

-YO!!!!

Im bettin all you *itches never recognize my flow!

-You just steal my dro
-and then you ask for Mo!

WELL-YOU-CANT-HAVE-NO cuz Im keepin all foh sho'
then Ill be stashin-n-stackin-n-packin it up
....IN OUR FOUR-FOOT ROCKSTARRZZZ

Then we'll be dippin in my 6speed
AND BE SMOCKIN ALL YOUR BOXTARZZZ...
Jus passing by you ****** WHO-AINT-GOT-HOT-CARZZZ....
-I guess your better off in Mars



Hah! That was definately stupid, but kinda fun at the same time!

 

[B-Lo]

Good thing they dont play that on the radio .....My ears would hurt

 

[RICDOGG]

-YO!!!!

Im bettin all you *itches never recognize my flow!

-You just steal my dro
-and then you ask for Mo!

WELL-YOU-CANT-HAVE-NO cuz Im keepin all foh sho'
then Ill be stashin-n-stackin-n-packin it up
....IN OUR FOUR-FOOT ROCKSTARRZZZ

Then we'll be dippin in my 6speed
AND BE SMOCKIN ALL YOUR BOXTARZZZ...
Jus passing by you ****** WHO-AINT-GOT-HOT-CARZZZ....
-I guess your better off in Mars

Hah! That was definately stupid, but kinda fun at the same time!

yeah you need to rock the word "legend" in there somewhere, cuz 6 speed could mean many thnigs...

 

[legenddriverc]

Don't quit your dayjob!!!!!!!!!!!!

j/k

 

[flashdragoon]

not bad, but definitly could use some polishing

 

[DaTimez420]

tight...just go to the notorious big thread and lay down some stuff...me & the ac got something started there

 

[Phil B]

Not to hate, but I could freestlye better than that....I consider myself no way a rapper either. Just a poet